Iltimos, sizning fikrlaringiz?

[Mona Lisa]

Spring is a time when we wish our farewells to gloomy but cosy, sorrow but tranquil days of winter. Spring a celebration of innocence, youth and new beginning.

The nature displays its beauty once again by coordinating performance of flora and fauna. Warm rays of the Sun break frozen rivers and let them run again to call for an audience. The Earth and Sky become a venue to hold the event. On the stage birds sing and flowers are awaken to their sweet melody, trees are dressed in their seasonal costume and bees kiss each and every ornament of the dress to admire, and butterflies perform a great dance. Spectators are performers equally performers are an audience. This is the act devoted to mark the new beginning.

Spring. Human kind associates it with young Angel who triggers our emotions, touch our senses once were still, refresh our soul once was sleep in cosy arms of the winter. Hence, we unwind our memories and fly on their wings reminiscing our childhood, distant friends and certainly the home. Hints of Angel’s magic charm take us to the road to travel not knowing when to return, discover something new yet familiar from the beginning. Perhaps, the most of all we start to endure joys of nature’s act and join them to play our piece. Unconsciously we learn lines of the script, act as we were directed to, we rehearse as we perform in harmony with dancing butterflies, running rivers, singing birds and so on. It is by far the most remarkable plays of all and it can be viewed only in spring.

Iltimos o'z fikr va mulohazangizni bering. Orangizda mandan ko'ra adabiyot va umuman yozuvchilikdan yahshi habardorlar bor deb ishonaman.Ushbu kichik maqolani International Student's Monthly Newsletter siga tez orada topshirishim keray. O'zim bunaqa narsa yozishdan qochib yurivdim lekin baribir qochib uzoqqa bora olmadim. 8)
Oldindan katta rahmat.
Sincerely, very hopeful ML ;)

[Iqra]

Saalams dear Mona Lisa...
When I read it my first words were "Wow how beautifully and innocently written" :o You've described spring so well and so beautifully, that I wish I was back at home to see and enjoy trees blossom, when trees wear their "seasonal costume". When I was child I used to think that they are dressed in their wedding dresses, since the wedding dress is the most beautiful and the best dress in our wardrobe. :D...Some Very nice comparisons you have made in you piece of Art :D Especially with a Young Angel…

Smelo svaday svoyu rabotu i ne perejivay...Its well written. I personally really liked it and enjoyed reading it… I’m sure others will agree with me, and will give better comments than I did; I’m not really good at doing that. ;)

Good luck in you further writings
Regards
Sister ;)
P.S Oh I want proper Spring in London :( …Mne vredno chitat’ takie krasiviye opisaniya Vesni…

[Dunyokezganqalandar]

Mona Lisa, i love beginning of spring it is y father's birthday in first days of spring....i imagoned our apricot trees..
after reading your post, it is the same as how we see and how i read and wrote in compositions in school....but all of those were in uzbek...in english i didnt even know that you can write such beautifulll
tasanno IQRAni gapiga qo'shilaman, tak derjat


qalandar
p.s hali yoz kelyapti, unga ham tayorgarlik ko'ravering, opa

[Alouddin]

oh these romantically oriented soft-hearts :)

[Mona Lisa]

Iqra, Thanks for your very positive comment. I'm glad that you've enjoyed it. :)

p.s hali yoz kelyapti, unga ham tayorgarlik ko'ravering, opa
Dunyokezganqalandar, keyingi faslga siz ham tayyorgarlik ko'ring balki sizdan eshitarmiz. ;) btw I thank you as well

I hope editor will not kick me out from her office :P

[Iqra]

I hope editor will not kick me out from her office :P

Don't worry She will love it; I'm sure she will even offer you a job. :D
Especially if the editor is she..You've done it well... As a reader I really liked it... Let’s hope that you'll get a positive professional point of view on your work... I'm sure they will like it...

Anyways Best of Luck to you

Regards,

Sister ;)
P.S if you don't mind I'll write it to my collection of different poems and literature writings... Copy Right ;)

[Royal]

Mona Lisa
You could added there just in case: This a nature and this a main part of the life. Life is so beatiful.

Yahshi bopti, lekin oqishdan boshqa narsaga yaramiydi. 8)

[]I[ A JL JL O D]

Royal, a yana nimaga yarash kerak ?!

[Mona Lisa]

I'm sure she will even offer you a job.
ohhh Iqra, the problem is I work there already..... :rolleyes:

Royal, By some chance have you worked as an editor..... You sound so like them. ;)
Hali o'qishga yarasa ham bu katta gap..

PS. Above little piece is CopyLeft since it hasn't published yet, even if it'll be pubished it still gonna be CopyLeft. :D

[Royal]

]I[ A JL JL O D
Bir kuni hapa qip qoyuvdim bittasini : Norin, qanaqa bopti disa, yiyishdan boshqa narsaga yarmiydigan botpi desam hapa bop qopti . Ozi yiyshdan boishqa nimaga yariydi .

[Mas'ud]

MONA LISA honim, albatta omad qozonishizga ishonaman
:rolleyes: :rolleyes: :rolleyes:

Olloh bilguvchiroqdir...

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"Tot kto sleduet svoey sud'be, znaet i umeet vse. Tol'ko odno delayet ispolneniye mechti nevozmozhnim, eto strah neudachi.
(Poulo Koel'o)

[Iqra]

Assalamu alaikum Mona Lisa
Ochen' bilo interesno uznat', did your editor like you work? what was the response? :) However, I'm sure that the response was very good...

Best regards,

sister ;)

[Mona Lisa]

Hi Iqra
Thanks for your interest ;) . Here what she said
1. Structure and flow was very good
2. Sentence construction was simple (she liked simplicityof it ) but required more sophisticated approach
3. Creative comparison was excellent i.e. like whole stage and play thing
4. The word ' and' used repetitively.
5. Some grammer mistakes.

Considering I wasn't native speaker and writing for the 1st time editor said I have ' potential' regardless of mistakes :?
People in the office liked very much which was very uplifting :)

[Iqra]

Oh That's a very good news than :) ...I'm sure once you'll make some improvements on the points she raised your next work will be just perfect.
Good luck in you future works ..
Regards,
sister ;)

[Dunyokezganqalandar]

I am gonna write about summer...uhhhhhhhhh
i am gonna challenge you if you wont reject,lets make tournametn the best essay for summer in exact 200 words?!

[Mona Lisa]

I am gonna write about summer...uhhhhhhhhh
i am gonna challenge you if you wont reject,lets make tournametn the best essay for summer in exact 200 words?!
hehe .... :D Woow are you serious? Ok I wouldn't reject :wink: Now you have 2 months until summer....
Wish you good luck

[Slimshady]

Salom,

Mona Lisahon opa, ochigini aytsam men Bahor to'grisida o'zbek cha ham bunday yoza olmayman, umuman hech qaysi bir tilda yoza olmasam kerak...
ofarin sizga... Royaljon aka aytkanlaridek o'qishdan boshqaga yaramaydigon bo'pti...
Turklarda bir gap bor "Yeme yaninda yat..." naq mashnaqa bo'pti... ijodiy hayotingizda muaffaqiyat tilab...

Slimshady

[Mona Lisa]

Rahmat Slimshady
Siz ham juda chiroyli qilib yozasiz faqat qalam bilan bir varoq qog'oz yoki zamonaviy qilib kompuyter oldidami 30 min vaqt sarflasayiz boldi ;)

[akamullo]

:bigdance: salom hammaga..togrisi Mona Lisahonga tasanno...Dunyokezganqalandarga kelsak siz ham Mona Lisahon aytgandek 30 daqika kalam qogozni olib harakat qilsangiz sizdan ham zor fikirlar chiqadi deb oyleman...Slimshady akahon ham zor yozadi(bu akahonimizzi bilmasam buni aytolmasdim:wink: )..hammalaringa oqishlarda omadlar...


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