pishu ya roman, da neprostoy a v stihah...

[Mimohodom]

Sed'moi - remontiruyut dush,
Shestoi - izmenyaet muzh,
Pyatyi - maternyi hor,
Chetvertyi - oruduet vor,
Tretii - grohochet rok,
Vtoroi - podgorel pirog,
Pervyi - nasiluyut al't.
Vse.
Doletel.
Asfal't.

[mustafa]

Mimohodom, vash stil do boli znakomo.

Do I know you?

[scorpio]

Mimohodom,
ti kak vsgda v svoyom repertuare. Nu chto ya mogu skazat krome LOOOOL :)

Ya podumal ili mimohodom grammatiku zabil ili tut yest masala kotoruyu nado otkopat, kogda prochital "asfalt" togda ponyal gde nujno kopat :)!

scorpio

[Freestyler]

Doyehala nromal'no. Celuyu.
Krisha

[Gaide]

Mimohodom, a vse taki ya bila prava, ti chereschur umniy :).
Ili ya za god v internete degradirovala :)
Nichego ne ponyala :). Gde roman to? :)..ya dumala ti chto to pro lubov napisal..xtati..eto daktil? yamb? horey? anapest? amfibrahiy? :)

[Mimohodom]

gaide, eto horek.
watch beavers in fiesta bowl.
www.osubeavers.com!!!
go beavs!

[Freestyler]

To Gaide: naschyot tvoih pervih dvuh strochek:

Kak skazal Vinni (tot chto Puh): "I togo i drugogo, i kak mojno pobol'she"...

[Mimohodom]

contest:

continue the poem. hotya dalshe asfalta kuda yesho mojno padat'? :)

[Dave]

v zavisimosti ot togo gde nachalos samo padenie:
zemlya -> mantiya -> yadro -> "Privet Amerikanskim shahteram!" (esli nachal padat' s geograficheskix koordinat: 41 00 N, 64 00 E, ili drugimi slovami Tashkent).


me.