first love

[lijnik]

The time i looked into your eyes
I knew, i never loved before
My heatr was cold, like frozen ice
That time it melt from heat of love

I never seen such pretty sight
Your shinning eyes were full of love
And when u looked at me and smiled
You took my mind, my heart, my soul

With every breath you're on my mind
I'm almost dead, i lose controll
But you're so beautiful ant kind
For you, i'll give my life, my all

My passion doesnt let me free
You can believe that it is true
With you, i'll be just like a king
But i will die without you

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[faso]

Tak derjat Lijnik!
Mne deystvitelno ponravilos tvoyo stihotvoreniye.
Ya ne somnevayus, chto v budushem te smojesh dostich eshyo naibolyee visokiye vershiny tvorchestva. Ya deystvitelno oshelomlen. Jdu tvoih novih stihov. S nailuchshimi pojelaniyami!!!

[lijnik]

Kogda lyubov' menya vdrug osenila
altar' dushi moyey ti zanyala
Menya svoim ti vzglyadom op'yanila
I dushu tak jestoko otnyala
Lyubov' imeyet koldavskuyu silu
Almaz vlyublennomu stanovitsya peskom
Ya pamyatnik lyubvi svoyey vozdvignu
Tebya printsessey sdelayu na nem
Eshe mi molodi, no ti pover mne
Bolshaya strast' k tebe vo mne gorit
Ya dumal o tebe vse eto vremya
Lish' o tebye mne serdce govorit
Yuchus' v fantaziyah svoih ya eti nochi
Bolit dusha, no vot uje rassvet
Lishenniy razuma ya rvu sebya na chast'ya
Yudol'yu placha stal mne etot svet

(perviye bukvi kajdoy stroki imeyut smisl, kogda-to etot stih bil posvyashen devushke kotoruyu ya lyubil)

[lijnik]

Another lonely day again
The drops of rain is all i see
My eyes are full of tears this day
The nature cries again with me

These drops from sky is not just rain
They're tears of clouds around the world
These clouds know every single pain
My pain that's made from stolen love

You know my every secret, rain
You are the only who i trust
You know my love, you know my pain
You are my friend, the first and last

Oh rain, dont cry, my friend, dont cry
Our tears are helpless, stop it sky
Dont care my friend, forget it all
Give up... Just smile... Enjoy the life

I know it's hard, i know it hurts
Even myself cant stop my tears
But you... forget my brocken heart
Forget my pain, forget my fear

I heard the word of rain: " Goodbye"
The sun appeared, clouds went away
The street began it's normal life
But me... I miss my friend, my rain

Dont ask me why, dont even try
To understand me... It's my life
It's broken heart... But anyway
I hope, i'll see my friend, my rain

[alvastijon]

Very impressive. Very well done. Waiting for new ones.
Regards