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V.I.P.
02-08-2000, 03:17 AM
Seems like I missed a lot of fun inhere for the couple months. Bir qancha ajoyib talantlarimiz o'z she'rlari bilan bizni hushnud qilishvotga bir paytda ularga teng kelib bo'lmaslikni bilgan holda man ham o'z she'rlarimni sizlarning e'tiborlaringa havola etmoqchi. Please do not criticise it too much :).

Mana yana qo'limda qalam
Yana qog'oz mening sirdoshim
Ko'zimda yosh, bog'zimda alam
Tugab borar mening bardoshim

Yolg'iz sendan izlardim panoh
FAqat senga dardim aytardim
Gar qilsamda hatolar,gunoh
Doim senga yana qaytardim.

Sorry lekin davomini eslay olmayapman. Daftarchamda bo'lishi kere. Keyin yozib qo'yaman davomini.

Tima
02-08-2000, 05:08 AM
V.I.P. Sizzi sherizzi o'qip, mani esimga shunga o'hshashrooo bitta sher tushti.

Men shoir emasman, lekin na qilay
Muhabbat qo'limga tutkazdi qalam
Shu tuyg'u tufayli yozdim senga sher
Zoraki ketsa deb dildagi alam...

Qolgani esimda yo'q. Pls. take into consideration that this is also PROSTO STIH.

Just James
02-08-2000, 06:30 AM
Well done both of you guys!
Vi velikolepno vladeete perom osobenno v oblasti "Prosto stih"
Budem jdat' prodoljeniy. Good luck!

KITTEN
02-08-2000, 09:41 AM
That is cool! Keep Going, We Like it! :)

KITTEN
02-08-2000, 09:41 AM
BTW, V.I.P.!
Do not get lost! We miss you here:)