Nechun

[Victim]

Nechun.
Ko`kragindan itardim rosti,
Eshikni tars yopdim yuzingga.
Khayollaring, ajabo,asti
O`khshamaydi nechun o`zingga?

Ketsaydi-ku ortga qaramay
O`zing kabi qaysar beshafqat,
Men kham balki panokh so`ramay,
Siginmasdim unga vaqt-bevaqt.

Khayollaring poyimda nechun
Daryo kabi o`tadi oqib?
Gokh adashib kelar yarim tun
Yo`lovchiday eshigim qoqib!

Eshik ochmok unga ko`p ogir,
Eshikni tars yopmok kham yomon
Sen khaeldan judo bir bagir,
Men gururdan qaysar qaytgan jon!


Esli est oshibki v napisanii ukagite pojaluysta a to pishu for the first time.
Zaranee spasibo, Victim.

[KITTEN]

Victim!
Brilliant poem. Thanks:)
BTW, You can write KH as H or X.
X- qattiq X.
H- yumshoq H.But I am not sure myself when you should use them properly. If you do not care, then use just H.
(e.g. Hayollarim, ham, o'hshamaydi)
Eto ne ispravlenie oshibok, eto prosto chtobi pisat' legche bilo.:)
Spasibo, Keep going and take care!

[Victim]

Kitten spasibo bolshoe za pomosh. Uchtu vse tvoi recomendazii.Postarayus pisat bolee properly.
Victim.